The Sorrows of Young Werewolf (eyeteeth) wrote,
The Sorrows of Young Werewolf

Star differs from star

So I was concerned that the stars in the last panel I posted didn't stand out enough against the crosshatched night sky. Without the disks of light around them they are swallowed completely, but even the disks were less distinct than I wanted. I found the situation improved when I placed a black border around each disk:

This had the added effect of making the stars look like pentacles from a Ryder-Waite tarot deck, which I rather liked. But could I do more to make the stars stand out from the sky without seeming to fight with it too much? Or did I have to choose either a solid black sky, as here, or no stars at all?

So I tried filling the circles in:

What do you think?
Tags: polls, stix, takingmyselfseriously, the bible, the book of jonah
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