The Sorrows of Young Werewolf (eyeteeth) wrote,
The Sorrows of Young Werewolf

Comments in the margins of the worst book ever written

When there is no more room in Hell, the manuscript I am currently editing will walk the earth.

  • Define?
  • Mention who this is?
  • Does this term require definition?
  • From Tennyson's "Charge of the Light Brigade"
  • Define?
  • Define
  • What you describe doesn't sound like a step
  • 4 isn’t a step either, just a state of being
  • Mention of Japanese word doesn't really add anything
  • Change b/c these things aren't criteria
  • You don't really set a standard for a goal -- the goal remains the same + you work toward it
  • What is this?
  • By def. a thing can't be more or less average
  • Comparing Sam Walton to Jesus is a bit much

The worst book ever written is about Wal-Mart. Maybe that's not so surprising.

Total word count (revised): 14,036
Tags: bitter copy editor
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